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Don't forget the box,
Don't forget the box,
The box is here, the box is there,
Don't forget the box.

The box it comes
Of wood and bronze
Sturdy weight and strong
Turn to the side, and there's a sign
"Don't forget the box".

She gleans the sight
This little child
A red haired girl of five
For to this game, of hide and seek
No better place to hide.

The sides are soft
The space is large
She slowly clambers in
Six turns to five, five turns to four
The Hunt will soon begin.

As time strikes one
Ready or not
Here the seeker comes
Though high and low, here and there
The Hunt it turns to naught

The minutes pass
They turn to hours
The girl has surely won
Though to her dreams, her eyes do close
Before the hunt is done.

She wakes disturbed
She hears the sound
What if this day become
The banging pierce, through hush profound
Nails go in the box.

Her cries ring out
The wood is thick
The folk hear naught a sound
This five year old, red haired girl
Is lowered in the ground.

The pounding dirt,
The muffled sky
The tears begin to drown
The darkness comes, the eyes grow dim
Til death greets in the ground.

Don't forget the box,
Don't forget the box,
The box is here, the box is there
Don't forget the box.
Don't forget the box.
Little Rhyme I made up so I wouldn't forget the box at work on Monday.


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Catreya Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Hey there XD
I spotted you on [link] and figured I'd say hi to a fellow paeroa-town person. XDD
Obsi1 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2008
Thnx for the :+fav: on GL Corps Wallpaper
Booyah! O_B_S_I_1
beatsthekangaroo Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2008
Cheers for droppin by and for the fave bro
VampElf27 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks for the fave! ^_^
MattMoylan Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2007  Professional Digital Artist
hey thanks for watching
LadyVeantirme Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2006
Thanks for the add! :)
FrankORourke Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2006  Professional General Artist
Thanks for the fav.
Nortallica Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2006
No problemo.
FrankORourke Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2006  Professional General Artist
browsing galleries and adding favorites will get you noticed more man, plus keep posting more art, I like you stuff so far, see ya around homie
FrankORourke Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2006  Professional General Artist
Hey man what's up, thanks for the watch...

Hope to see more art up soon...
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